Haiku

[chazix]

Might not be many who can appreciate this offering. It came to me when I was having "one of those days" on a former day job in tech. I had seen the words of the first two lines so often, it eventually occurred to me that they could start a haiku.

NFS server
Not responding, still trying
Outside, spring beckons

 

[ETLS]

Originally
I wouldn't use just one word
But this is Haiku

 

[Quadman2]

In the glass I gaze
past longing fills the mirror
of the man I was

Q

 

[usedto]

Man from Nantucket
Could not think of a good rhyme
Sometimes life just sucks.

 

[noogies]

Not a haiku guy
Limericks are more my thing
Love the silly rhymes.

 

[Quadman2]

Not a haiku guy
Limericks are more my thing
Love the silly rhymes.

As in yer Frank Z quote.

Q

 

[harman/kardon]

mind fullness of your
spirituality care
keep body soul mind

(You can also think of that one as sort of a neverending circle.)

 

[Christian B]

Greyness of the sky
Makes me yearn for sun again
And autumns colors

 

[Beatnik]

Gangstaku

Dont wanna dis me
Imma gone ta kick yo azz
Yo up in tha grass

 

[noogies]

Country Haiku:

Since you left me, my
Dog died and now I'm in jail
Dead drunk, no pain now.

 

[vinylGirlFl]

Y’all are just the best
Better at this than you think
Makes my heart feel full

 

[OnTheBlitz]

when your heart feels full
you know you're in this thread
this is living proof

 

[70's Rockfan]

dog poop on my shoe
put them in the neighbors car
it's his dog anyway

 

[likebike23]

Vinyl disc spinning.
Stylus locked in one way groove.
Unwinding, relaxed.

 

[OnTheBlitz]

relaxed loose-fit jeans
fit my girlish figure
like a dream machine

 

[Quadman2]

Country Haiku:

Since you left me, my
Dog died and now I'm in jail
Dead drunk, no pain now.

Nice one, partner!

Q

 

[yzzaj]

.

This one don't conform.
Robin wasn't good at rules.
Too bad he's now gone:


"Red sand between my toes. Summer vacation in outer space. That was a Martian haiku" - Robin Williams


.

 

[scoloheros]

Have seen this before.
Japanese beatnik groove style.
Or Japanese rap.

 

[Splatter Pak]

five, five, five, five, five
seven, seven, seven, sev...
five, five, five, five, five

a haiku d'etat
not really political
not a rhyme, either

 

[Quadman2]

Dark sky overhead
Night creatures swooping downward
Moonlight reigns supreme


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