Haiku

[Quadman2]

Space

Endless forms take shape
Everywhere yet never near
All paths lead to here

Ah hah, a riddle in the mix, which teases the mind.

Q

Space

Endless forms take shape
Everywhere yet never near
All paths lead to here

 

[Mystic]

See prolapsed stylus
Listen to prolapsed stylus
Prolapsed stylus sings

 

[Mystic]

I "haiku" do you?
"Haiku" "haiku" this I do
But do you "canoe"?

 

[Quadman2]

This is a cool watch on the subject.

/offtopic.

The last "hypothesis" borders on "religious belief" causation.


Q

 

[Quadman2]

See prolapsed stylus
Listen to prolapsed stylus
Prolapsed stylus sings

Good use or personification, Mys.


Q

 

[Quadman2]

I "haiku" do you?
"Haiku" "haiku" this I do
But do you "canoe"?

Used to, too!

Q

 

[Quadman2]

See prolapsed stylus
Listen to prolapsed stylus
Prolapsed stylus sings

Q

 

[Quadman2]

ALIENS

Perhaps lizard-like,
maybe god-like they appear
with time telling us.

Q

 

[old_tv_nut]

Used to, too!

Q

Once, she used to, too;
Became a ballerina,
Wore a used tutu.

 

[bobsvinyl]

Late Summer

Mottled green bushes,
Light playing in their shadows.
Soft breeze caresses leaves
As gnats breakdance in the sun,
Their concert nearing it's end.

 

[Apreggiator]

Apotheosis

Sunset scorches gold
Ripe fields bow to fleeting dusk
Stillness births the void

 

[Quadman2]

Late Summer

Mottled green bushes,
Light playing in their shadows.
Soft breeze caresses leaves
As gnats breakdance in the sun,
Their concert nearing it's end.

Can't count the number of figures of speech used in your "dying Summer"!

WOW!

Q

 

[Quadman2]

Apotheosis

Sunset scorches gold
Ripe fields bow to fleeting dusk
Stillness births the void

One of your best "word-creations" to date!


Q

 

[Quadman2]

Once, she used to, too;
Became a ballerina,
Wore a used tutu.

This "word-picture" is...just too much!


Q

 

[Quadman2]

MOUNTAIN

Condescendingly
haughty in your towering
perspective looking
upon us humans who seem
like mere insects from your stare. (A Tanka)

Q

 

[Apreggiator]

Stuck

Threshold of repair
Echoes ask, what lingers here
Tired hearts drift apart

 

[Quadman2]

Stuck

Threshold of repair
Echoes ask, what lingers here
Tired hearts drift apart

Reminds me of some marriages I've come across...reflecting reality!

Q

 

[Quadman2]

HOPE

Faith in expecting
future events will happen
as we have planned.

Q

 

[Apreggiator]

HOPE

Faith in expecting
future events will happen
as we have planned.

Q

Hope when I needed it. Many thanks Mr. Q.

 

[bobsvinyl]

Overlooked

Water weaves through grass,
Lazily leaking along
From the unwatched hose.