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Haiku

Violence II

Going to the mall
once a safe activity
now a cause for fear.
Endless stream of shots
Reign down on the innocent.
 
bobsvinyl said:
Violence II

Going to the mall
once a safe activity
now a cause for fear.
Endless stream of shots
Reign down on the innocent.
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Going "dark" this day, B.

Innocence in life assassinated by death's hand...with someone's help!

Well focused. :thumbsup:



bobsvinyl said:
Happier Thoughts

Tryptophan sweeps in
Head nodding, eyes are leaden
Turkey wins again.
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Laughs on me. Before doing a "look-see" I thought "Tryptophan" was either a Greek god or warrior. :rolleyes:

Makes sense now. Great personification to drive home a dietic end-result. :trebon:


Q
 
bobsvinyl said:
Sightless

Milky eyes searching
Unable to see the truth
Sensing it instead.
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That "milky" really drove home the "nail" with me. :thumbsup: Got an older neighbour who is going through the very same sight-trauma right now.

Your personification in the second Haiki brings-it-home as well! I've felt that as well bout those stubborn "leaves".


Q
 
This is from long ago and i don't remember the exact words.
Probably by a butt freezing back packer in a tent.

Bed side bright patch,
Is it moon or snow?
Raise head, I see moon,
Lower head, think about home.
 
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