Haiku

[Quadman2]

Winter Wood Heat.
Seasoned and well stacked
Piece by piece carried inside
Dancing flames with warmth.

A kinda "sexual" connotation to your Haiku this day, TT.

Least it seems that way to me.

Well crafted!


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[bobsvinyl]

Winter's Victim

The crack of a limb
Beaten by incessant winds
Falls broken to earth
Spearing through the wet soil.

 

[Quadman2]

Strong verbs evoke word pictures that fit with at least three senses deployed.

Excellent choice of words!


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[Quadman2]

Winter Highways

Deadly ice surface
causing vehicles to spin
slippery pirouettes.


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[bruno80918]

Below zero cold
winters icy fingers chill
body, but not soul

 

[Quadman2]

Hey, b80918... great personification, and a bit of existential thrown in as well!


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[bobsvinyl]

Wildlife

Young rabbit grazing
Caught by security cam
Unaware of cold.

 

[Quadman2]

Guess better caught by the "camera" than a predator, eh?


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[bobsvinyl]

Alive


Feet crunching through snow.
Lungs fill with cold,crystal air.
Good to be alive.

 

[Quadman2]

Our senses do come "alive" in the frigid temps!

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[Quadman2]

HAIKU

Meanings extracted
from few meaningful words shared
creating bridges.

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[bobsvinyl]

Rusty

Rain pummels the scrap
Looking for weakened sections
Patiently gnawing.

 

[Quadman2]

"Rain". Gentle to the touch... yet it eats mountains.


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[Quadman2]

FRIGID AIR

Ice crystals forming
on inner nose, with hands now
losing sense of touch!

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[bobsvinyl]

Frigid AIR

Ice crystals forming
on inner nose, with hands now
losing sense of touch!

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Frigidaire

Ice cubes careen down
Clattering into a glass.
Electronic hum
pulsing softly from inside
the stainless steel appliance.

 

[Quadman2]

Frigidaire

Ice cubes careen down
Clattering into a glass.
Electronic hum
pulsing softly from inside
the stainless steel appliance.

Gotta work this Tanka into a commercial some how.

There's $$$$ in them words!


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[Quadman2]

LOVE

Can't really touch it,
only can feel it inside
after it is earned!


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[bobsvinyl]

Internet

Hand covers the mouse
Nudging it into action
as the screen lights up.

 

[Te-Te]

Winter Stew.
Aroma wafts up
Slow simmer gently stirring
Anticipation.

 

[bobsvinyl]

Existence

Laundry list of life
Endless like the universe,
Constantly changing.
It's a futile exercise,
but it must be attempted.