Haiku

[Quadman2]

Frigid

Hard icy fingers
Grasping any exposed flesh
Singeing like fire.

A timely share. Liked the "apposing temperatures" used in order to express "pain"!

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[Apreggiator]

This or that

Wave or counted step
music slips through either net
arguments remain

 

[Quadman2]

This or that

Wave or counted step
music slips through either net
arguments remain

Really like the intertwining of reality and subsurface diving, with your allowing the reader to interpret their personal take on hearing.


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[bobsvinyl]

Blizzard

Impressive snow mound
Rises up from the front lawn.
My own Matterhorn.

 

[bobsvinyl]

Winter Woes

Lips constantly cracked
Flesh feels cold and moistureless
Breathing is painful.

 

[Quadman2]

WINTER WARRIORS

Snowman sentinels
guarding frigid ice castles
with only grass brooms.

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[Quadman2]

Winter Woes

Lips constantly cracked
Flesh feels cold and moistureless
Breathing is painful.

Blizzard

Impressive snow mound
Rises up from the front lawn.
My own Matterhorn.

Mortal weakness and extreme POV well shared!

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[Apreggiator]

Alp

Stone ribs kiss blue sky
Clouds lean into cold, slow turns
Vastness slows my breath

 

[Quadman2]

Alp

Stone ribs kiss blue sky
Clouds lean into cold, slow turns
Vastness slows my breath

Your sense of "Awe" and sharing with personification shines through your first handed "message"!

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[Quadman2]

REDWOOD GIANT

Hyperion you
stand tall, lofty, looking down
at tiny humans
squiggling about like bugs
crawling in your huge shadow.

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"Hyperion"- tallest tree in the world at 360 feet.

 

[bobsvinyl]

REDWOOD GIANT

Hyperion you
stand tall, lofty, looking down
at tiny humans
squiggling about like bugs
crawling in your huge shadow.

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"Hyperion"- tallest tree in the world at 360 feet.

You described one of our most illustrious members! @Hyperion

 

[Quadman2]

You described one of our most illustrious members! @Hyperion

I hear you. Wonder which one is the older?

 

[bobsvinyl]

Back Burner

Unfinished projects
Fill all the dusty corners
Waiting for new life.

 

[Apreggiator]

I hear you. Wonder which one is the oldest?

Old farts

Silver beards chuckle
Pockets full with hard earned years
Knowing which things last

 

[bobsvinyl]

Old Farts-Part Deux

Wet, musty smelling
Lingering in the still air
Takes your breath away.

 

[Quadman2]

Old farts

Silver beards chuckle
Pockets full with hard earned years
Knowing which things last

Hey! We resen... resemble that remark!

And, your "turn" is coming. I'll put money on that!

As per the content:
line 1. most often
line 2. sometimes
line 3. True

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[Quadman2]

Old Farts-Part Deux

Wet, musty smelling
Lingering in the still air
Takes your breath away.

Structure
content
Jury's still out.

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[Quadman2]

THOUGHTS

Fleeting electric
biochemical pieces
of information.

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[Quadman2]

HUNTER

Wanting to please us
by smelling, sensing our game
you point out our kill.

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[Apreggiator]

Always Music

Hands change, wood remains
Bowed strings resonate through time
Tunes spring from great minds