Soldering
I don't mean this in any mean or snarky way, but your soldering technique is misguided and the entirety of those connections should be repaired prior to further use.
The key to soldering is a solid mechanical connection with the wires or leads physically wrapped around each other. Tack-soldering is suitable for testing, but the joint is mechanically weak and electrically higher resistance. Vibration can cause those tack-soldered connections to fail.
From a prior posting of mine, here are some excellent guides to soldering:
Files are too large to post as attachments.
Inductor Placement
Biggles is completely correct that your inductor placement is
incorrect, and the coupling will degrade the sound.
I have elsewhere posted the following explanation:
The inductors must be placed far enough apart that the fields do not interact. The rule of thumb suggests minimizing coupling between two air-core inductors in the same plane by ensuring that the inter-inductor distance is no less than 2.5 times the diameter of the larger inductor.
Which admittedly seems a bit much, but Troels (below cited) sets forth about four inches as sufficient for his example, and that seems to be in keeping with the rule given the diameters of those coils. I refer you to the work of Troels Gravesen, the master on the subject of inductor placement:
The most important aspect of crossover construction are:
(a) proper mounting of the inductors (above set forth); and
(b) proper securing of all components using non-conductive ties or mounts to prevent fracturing the solder joints via vibration from the sound.
One suggestion: the crossover is best placed outside the cabinet for initial testing. Mistakes happen and inserting/removing the screws rapidly becomes time consuming and tedious. Plus the screw holes sometimes loosen and must be filled with epoxy, then drilled, etc.
Bypass Capacitors
I also suggest adding bypass capacitors to improve the high-frequency performance. Boston Acoustics, to cite an example of commercial use, added bypass capacitors in many of its lines because the sound was deemed improved enough to warrant the additional manufacturing expense.
Here is a discussion I posted with followup comments from others about the benefits: