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Haiku

Opposites

Winter has set in.
Stillness and cold rule the land
COVID ignores this
Feverishly sweeping through
Igniting all in it's path.
 
Mystic said:
Boom boom boom boom boom.
Boom boom boom boom boom boom boom.
Boom boom boom boom boom.
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Kinda reminds me of "Nam" days, as in the "Boom Boom" dept. But this had yet another meaning!

I'd give you at least an "E", Mys...for effort! ;)


As a side note: Great example of onomatopoeia!

Q
 
Quadman2 said:
Kinda reminds me of "Nam" days, as in the "Boom Boom" dept. But this had yet another meaning!

I'd give you at least an "E", Mys...for effort! ;)


As a side note: Great example of onomatopoeia!

Q
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Effort Effort E
Effort Effort Effort E
Effort Effort E
 
Man, Mys, you are making it difficult to appreciate your Haiku-like format.

I can't decide if you are anaphoric or more of an epizeuxis-type writer in your poetic format of this archaic Japanese writing.


You'll have to chime in and clarify, eh? ;)


Q
 
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