Haiku
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likebike23
Addicted Member
Cheap Records
Dirty, musty smell
Despite cheap price no one bites
Not even for free
Dirty, musty smell
Despite cheap price no one bites
Not even for free
Quadman2
Lunatic Member
Quadman2
Lunatic Member
AGE
Drains God's hour glass
with hour time grains flowing,
day becomes week, as year flows
into decade as streams of
life filter to glass bottom.
Q
The above, a Tanka which has the format of:
Line one- 5 syllables
Line two- 7 "
Line three- 5 "
Line four- 7 "
Line five- 7 "
A bit more of a struggle than the Haiku, but more word input to share.
Give one a go, if so inclined!
Q
Drains God's hour glass
with hour time grains flowing,
day becomes week, as year flows
into decade as streams of
life filter to glass bottom.
Q
The above, a Tanka which has the format of:
Line one- 5 syllables
Line two- 7 "
Line three- 5 "
Line four- 7 "
Line five- 7 "
A bit more of a struggle than the Haiku, but more word input to share.
Give one a go, if so inclined!
Q
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noogies
My Favorite Woofers.
Jeez, Ted! It's enough of a struggle for me to come up with three lines!
MuseChaser
Super Member
OUCH
One should think like me.
A world of people like me
would be much better.
You don't believe as I do?
You are wrong and ignorant.
Thanks to a few members on a couple threads for the inspiration. Beautiful attitudes.
One should think like me.
A world of people like me
would be much better.
You don't believe as I do?
You are wrong and ignorant.
Thanks to a few members on a couple threads for the inspiration. Beautiful attitudes.
MuseChaser
Super Member
REGRET
No common ground seen.
But then, unexpectedly,
A kind hand extends.
No common ground seen.
But then, unexpectedly,
A kind hand extends.