Haiku

[bobsvinyl]

Fog
Softly descending,
Swallowing the rays of sun.
Houses devoured
As the coastline vanishes
Into the silent white wall.

 

[Quadman2]

Time Writes Its Love Letter

A brief hallway scent
And suddenly I am there
Unaware back then
That ordinary moment
A gift that can't be relived

And "Time"...moves but in only ONE direction!

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[Quadman2]

NATURE

Her present presence
on whims, little understood
by we mere humans
who strive and try to cope with
this moody goddess who rules .

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[Quadman2]

Fog
Softly descending,
Swallowing the rays of sun.
Houses devoured
As the coastline vanishes
Into the silent white wall.

"Fog" has quite the "appetite" as advanced by you, bv.

By the way, "Big-a-mist" is Italian for "fog".


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[Quadman2]

DOLLY

Talented sweet gal
capturing our western hearts
now entertaining
on a higher level still
sharing her goodness and love.

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[bobsvinyl]

The Road Ends

He slowly slumped down,
the air leaving his body.
His glazed eyes fluttered,
Catching fragments of a life
That now litters the soil.



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[bobsvinyl]

Cumulative Clouds

Clouds silently pass,
Soft, changing nebulous shapes
Sometimes angry, filled with tears
Crying for us all
And the damage we have done.

 

[Quadman2]

The Road Ends

He slowly slumped down,
the air leaving his body.
His glazed eyes fluttered,
Catching fragments of a life
Spilling from a projector.



,

WOW! Multiple takes/interpretations issuing forth from your carefully selected "words" forged!

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[bobsvinyl]

WOW! Multiple takes/interpretations issuing forth from your carefully selected "words" forged!

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And I went and changed the last line as you were commenting.

 

[Quadman2]

Cumulative Clouds

Clouds silently pass,
Soft, changing nebulous shapes
Sometimes angry, filled with tears
Crying for us all
And the damage we have done.

Heavy in personification, seeing through the eyes of Nature.

Well executed!


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[Quadman2]

And I went and changed the last line as you were commenting.

Grateful you kept most of the most of the "orig" intact.

Some writers oft destroy the entire initial intent!


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[Quadman2]

STORM

Nature's fireworks
lighting, lightening up skies
beyond man's efforts!

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[Quadman2]

CRIPPLE

Hobbling along
slippery streets on crutches
more insect-like in
navigating like wounded
animal seeking refuge.

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[bobsvinyl]

Freedom

She ran through the crowd,
Laughing at their cold faces,
Feeding off the fear
That she had cultivated.
It was her lone source of strength.


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[Mark B]

Mystery woman
Her intention to enchant
And then be missed

 

[Quadman2]

Freedom

She ran through the crowd,
Laughing at their cold faces,
Feeding off the fear
That she had cultivated.
It was her lone source of strength.


,

First thing that came to mind...a witch/sorceress.

Well presented!

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[Quadman2]

Mystery woman
Her intention to enchant
And then be missed

Ah... well introduced, this metaphysical lady!

You've opened a lot of doors of thought.


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[Apreggiator]

Stones Throw

We ripple water
Yet our fire will fall dark
Trees fall in silence

 

[Apreggiator]

Sphinx Stellatarum
(For the hummingbird hawk-moth)

Your birdlike humming
Rocksteady Aeronautics
Still, these borrowed names

 

[Quadman2]

Stones Throw

We ripple water
Yet our fire will fall dark
Trees fall in silence

Your ambiguity and references beguile!

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