It is odd, but not peculiar

[luvvinvinyl]

I understood,
When outdoors
I was carving wood,
Bliss.

Thatch, reading your poem, above, the Math student in me got slapped with an idea for a Haiku, a somewhat gentle re-write of your verse. I often see patterns in things, such as Doc's premise. With your kind permission, I offer you this collaborative effort:

Carving Wood outdoors,
At one with the Earth and Sky,
I understand Bliss.​

I hope you enjoy the image.

Bart, I guess this makes me better suited for editing than creative writing. :yes:

 

[Thatch_Ear]

Wow! I just posted a Haiku in tubes!!!

Just kidding I saw your post there... but I did post the Haiku there because of my poem here. The form here was inncorrect (as was the one in tubes) but the spirit was just right. I love your Haiku, but it is now yours....... let's start another thread. Since you have already written one, you start it. I am going to start working on one. But not dealing with war, politics or religion but maybe pink Miatas!

 

[Thatch_Ear]

In the interests of mathematical accuracy (!) would you please visit this site?[/QUOTE


Shhhh, don't tell anybody I misspelled that to get 3 out of 1. (there, that 2 makes it even)

 

[luvvinvinyl]

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao:

 

[luvvinvinyl]

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao:

 

[grumpy]

**** does my head hurt after reading this. Too early in the morn for me !

 

[luvvinvinyl]

Nah, not too early. You're just too old for a three-day party! Where ya been, Grumpy? Missing out on the fun!

 

[Dr. Strangelove]

It is missing, but not lost.

Doc

 

[luvvinvinyl]

Like a bulldog, Doc.

Oh, like a Bulldog, not a Chihuahua.

 

[Reel 2 Reel]

This is gettin old....but not stale!......

 

[luvvinvinyl]

It is getting, but not old, and certainly not stale.

 

[steve gibson]

We could freeze it but it won't be frozen.

 

[mhardy6647]

It is getting, but it is not old, nor stale, nor frozen.

Indeed, it's getting better
I shan't type another letter
I had something profound to say, but alas I am a forgetter

 

[steve gibson]

The day is warm and sunny
Off to find the Easter bunny!


Don't laugh, Robert Frost (not frozen), got famous this way.

 

[luvvinvinyl]

uh, I hate to be the one to break it to you, but

The day is warm and sunny
Off to find the Easter bunny!

ain't EXACTLY Robert Frost! :lmao:

 

[luvvinvinyl]

BTW, it is sunny but not warm,
and it is bunny, but not Easter. ( I know, I know, but ya gotta play by the rules!)

 

[steve gibson]

I get carried, not taken away.

 

[Fast_Eddie]

It's Jefferson but not Airplane.

It's Jennifer but not Aniston.

It's Summer but not Spring.

Did I get it?

 

[ckelly]

I am cofused, not baffled

 

[Dr. Strangelove]

It's Jefferson but not Airplane.

It's Jennifer but not Aniston.

It's Summer but not Spring.

Did I get it?

Yes, bit it is Pitt, and not Aniston.

Doc